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bribrie
#1 Posted : Friday, January 07, 2011 7:39:54 AM(UTC)
bribrie

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Location: Charlestown, Indiana
although i am not dead yet
they have come to take my last breath 
although ii am not allowed within 
they have come to take my sin
although i am a still survivor 
they have come to be a provider 
although i am not very deep 
they have come to put me to sleep 
loving music :D
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bribrie
#2 Posted : Friday, January 07, 2011 7:40:48 AM(UTC)
bribrie

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need comments please
loving music :D
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K12CAVA
#3 Posted : Friday, January 14, 2011 7:02:21 PM(UTC)
K12CAVA

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Joined: 3/25/2009(UTC)
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I really like your poems, but I think you should also try lighter poems as well. The reason I say this is because after a while these poems might start to getting to you. Overall though, great rhyming scheme.
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Dillonwescott
#4 Posted : Tuesday, January 18, 2011 2:01:35 PM(UTC)
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r u in college?
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bribrie
#5 Posted : Monday, January 24, 2011 8:44:56 AM(UTC)
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Location: Charlestown, Indiana
no i am not in college why u ask?
loving music :D
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