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One in a Million-My Own Original Song. Tell me what you think.
Giselle_D
#1 Posted : Friday, November 12, 2010 3:08:51 PM(UTC)
Giselle_D

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Joined: 11/12/2010(UTC)
Posts: 4

Location: Aurora, Colorado

(Guitar)
Wasting our time chasing butteflies will only make you crazy
Following after whispers of a promised love forgotten
Will make you want to cry, want to die
Rip your heart to pieces
But believe there's one in a million
Round that corner, waiting for you to say

Hello, how are you? Darling, I've been waiting my whole life through

(Chorus)
These fields of flowers, hour after hour, will leave you high and dry
They're withering promises lost in the wind, don't expect to return again
Even when you think there's no one left on this earth for you
Remember, one in a million, one in a million's only here for you

(Guitar)
Crying through the night, those tears of sorrow bring you down
Is it worth the sadness acting as if nothing hurts your heart?
Broken dreams have, as it seems, created a hopeless me
But believe there's one in a million, round that corner
Waiting for you to say...

Hello, how are you? Darling, I've been waiting my whole life through...

(Chorus)
These fields of flowers, hour after hour, will leave you high and dry
They're withering promises, lost in the wind, don't expect to return again
Even when you think there's no one left on this earth for you
Remember one in a million, one in a million's only here for you

Breathe into me, make my soul alive
Fill me with your love

One in a million, one in a million's only here for you...
For you.


I think this song is kind of corny, but here I play this one on my guitar...


Nihon ga dai suki desu yo! Nihon ni ikitai desu!

Japan and South Korea are my goals in life.
2010Shakespear
#2 Posted : Sunday, November 14, 2010 11:50:56 AM(UTC)
2010Shakespear

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Joined: 10/7/2010(UTC)
Posts: 17

I like ur song, it sounds good, I write raps tho not songs
The Fallen
bribrie
#3 Posted : Tuesday, December 21, 2010 7:59:31 PM(UTC)
bribrie

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Joined: 11/26/2010(UTC)
Posts: 288

Location: Charlestown, Indiana

i like it too but i like rap better but its still good lol
loving music :D
All4Jesus
#4 Posted : Tuesday, December 21, 2010 9:55:11 PM(UTC)
All4Jesus

Rank: Super Next Stepper

Joined: 10/7/2010(UTC)
Posts: 136

Location: Longmont, Colorado

I like it a lot. I am a metal head, but love the guitar all in all. I can just hear the song playing in my head, nice job.
"Anyone who say's only sunshine brings happiness has never danced in the rain with God. I will continue to dance." -Keilah
hauntingspirit01
#5 Posted : Tuesday, December 28, 2010 6:10:56 PM(UTC)
hauntingspirit01

Rank: Starting Next Stepper

Joined: 12/28/2010(UTC)
Posts: 11

That's so sweet. Great imagery going on. ^.^
simplyshel
#6 Posted : Sunday, February 20, 2011 12:04:36 PM(UTC)
simplyshel

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Joined: 2/20/2011(UTC)
Posts: 2

That was really good. I liked it a lot. I, too, could hear it playing in my head. A lot of people would be able to relate and that's what a good song is for. Keep up the good work. :)
A45_Z65
#7 Posted : Tuesday, February 22, 2011 3:59:45 AM(UTC)
A45_Z65

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Joined: 2/10/2011(UTC)
Posts: 4

I really loved that song. I think that a lot of people really could relate to it. I know that I could. I also think that you should keep up all of the good work, and that you did a really nice job on the song. :)

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