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polka_dot_rocker
#1 Posted : Thursday, December 07, 2006 4:55:01 PM(UTC)
polka_dot_rocker

Rank: New Next Stepper

Joined: 12/7/2006(UTC)
Posts: 1

Slowly we build this wall
Brick by Brick it grows
Till soon it will be
Gigantic
Huge
Enormous
One day we won't be able to
See
Hear
Feel or
Understand each other anymore
Even the memory of us together will
Be Gone
And in that place will be this foreboding Wall
Laughing at our fate
Haha you see
I won again
It's quite easy for me
To seperate the best of friends
And watch their friendship
Crumble Down
While in that place
I am built
And slowly take control
Till eventually they spread apart
Distant
Disconnected
Seperated
So you see, aren't I so clever
This wall is undestroyable
And just think
It's all your doing
For it was you who built me
Brick by Brick
You laid the mortor
Till one day I took
Control
But of course you see
Now it's too late
For as you watch me now
Head in Hands
Shoulders slumped
Eyes red from crying
You think back to the day
The day the first brick was laid

-LEAH C.
DoubleHelix_07
#2 Posted : Saturday, December 09, 2006 6:28:08 PM(UTC)
DoubleHelix_07

Rank: New Next Stepper

Joined: 12/9/2006(UTC)
Posts: 1

Words cant describe how amazing that was.
Roadkill_29
#3 Posted : Monday, December 11, 2006 6:49:50 AM(UTC)
Roadkill_29

Rank: Junior Next Stepper

Joined: 11/22/2006(UTC)
Posts: 57

That was amazing! You can really wirte!

~Roadkill~
tanri
#4 Posted : Friday, December 15, 2006 7:55:36 AM(UTC)
tanri

Rank: Senior Next Stepper

Joined: 12/5/2006(UTC)
Posts: 70

i could feel your spirit in that one. the best writing has the author's heart.
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