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Karleyxx
#1 Posted : Sunday, December 17, 2006 3:08:19 PM(UTC)
Karleyxx

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Frightening days peirced their minds,[/align]
Leaving scars soon left behind.[/align]
Scorching skin, more or less[/align]
Leaving ashes, burning flesh.[/align]
Stench of human pain and sorrow,[/align]
smelled by the noses who see no tomorrow.[/align]
Indignant voices ring in their ears,[/align]
creating realities worn-down fears.
[/align]Thrown out "forgotten" acceptance dues,
[/align]never reached the public news.
[/align]Shattered souls went down in flames,
[/align]Leaving only ashes to remember their pains. [/align]<3 Karley Perkins
This is about the holocaust. I am taking a class about it and I just got done with a big project [about concentration camps], and decided to write about it. [/align]
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tanri
#2 Posted : Monday, December 18, 2006 5:49:55 AM(UTC)
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Joined: 12/5/2006(UTC)
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your tone was well suited for the material. i've done studies, too.
if you're interested, i could send you a bunch of information that no one else would probably have about the TRUE and shoved-under-the-rug reason for the Holocaust. It would be no trouble for me, and it wouldn't be standard "the-Holocaust-was-bad" monotone info... you'd definately surprise your teachers...
[:)] tanri
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